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I loved a man once
An angel in human form
But he never saw me
As if I was hidden by a storm

Another man claimed to love me
I thought I loved him too
But then his rage took me
Of life that was the last I knew

I did love another
But unfaithful I was not
Still he tore me apart
And this dreadful curse I got

My son was punished too
For crimes in his father's head
He even took the cat
Now all three of us are dead

I shall never love again
All I feel is pain and rage
Those who disturb my rest can only
Open my monster's cage

And yet there is another
In death his life is cloaked
But he spoke to me with kindness
Even though I only croaked

He says his love is black
But his words are pure like white
Know that he is my true love
He is my Light
PLEASE COMMENT AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!
ANOTHER LIGHTXKAYAKO DEVIATION!
I did do another poem for them but it was very short. It was on the deviation 'Black Love' and it was basically Light explaining his love for Kayako. So I decided to do another one, this time Kayako is talking about Light, and about how men have betrayed her in the past.
I couldn't resist the play on words, Light is Kayako's light.
I made the preview image on paint but it's very simple compared to my other ones.
I do not own Kayako or Light.
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kriss80858 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice!

I love the 'But he spoke to me with kindness. Even though I only croaked.' part :D
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ANGELWOLFCHILD Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. :D
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emilyricardi Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011  Hobbyist
thats was amazing i could sooo see that happening
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ANGELWOLFCHILD Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks alot, glad I'm not the only who can see that. :D
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emilyricardi Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2011  Hobbyist
:)
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MinyWild Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2010
And, forgot to mention, that pic of Kayako at the top is my fave pic of Kayako ever!
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ANGELWOLFCHILD Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
YAY! I've never got so many good responses from one person before! I'm so glad you like my work.
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MinyWild Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2010
Your welcome!
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MinyWild Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010
Its lovely. I actually teared up reading this. Its so emotive and so much detail. As much as I liked the Black Love poem, this is amazing!
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ANGELWOLFCHILD Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, I made someone nearly cry... that was unexpected!
I'm glad you like it so much.
And thanks for faving it. :D
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