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HERE IT IS AGAIN!!! The creepypasta website is opening it's submission period soon, and I think most of my watchers are aware by now that I have the ambition of getting a creepypasta successfully submitted to the site. 

I have two options this time, and you can submit more than one during one submission period so I think I'm going to put them both in, but what I need to know is what needs to be changed. 

The first one is the story for my most successful and well-written OC, Djed:…

And the second one is a very new one that I am very impressed with, mostly because it actually creeped me out as I wrote it, Donation:…

What I need is criticism here. What do I need to change/adjust/rewrite on these? They are not perfect, I know that, so I need to do anything I can to improve them. Now the submission period is due to close on August 20th, so ideally I want to have these pieces finished and ready to submit by the end of July. So feedback feedback feedback. Don't tiptoe around my feelings, be honest and critical.

You guys have probably guessed by now that I'm going to do a journal entry for every time a submission period opens until I've managed to get a piece accepted. 

Thanks! :D
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Angela Mary McCann
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Personal Quote: "Thus I draw from the absurd three consequences, which are my revolt, my freedom, and my passion. By the mere activity of consciousness I transform into a rule of life what was an invitation to death, and I refuse suicide." Albert Camus - The Myth of Sisyphus

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CATtheMinion Featured By Owner 4 days ago   General Artist
thanks for faving my piece… !
HidanDemon Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014
thanks for the favorite!!! ^^
ANGELWOLFCHILD Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :D
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Thanks for the fave :D
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Thank you very much for the add!
ANGELWOLFCHILD Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No problem, thanks for the Llama. Have one back :D
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